Monday, January 14, 2013

"Free as a Bird" (A Ray Lewis Poem)



"Free as a Bird" (A Ray Lewis Poem)
by Alexander Camp


You weren't born a bird, but you were born to be great,
to bring hurricanes to the bright sunshine state,
and quickly move on to the brightest of stage
to write your own fable, to fulfill your fate

so they praised you for plays in the depths of december,
as you guided your flock back south for warmer weather,
they called you their king, bound by the purple forever,
but I see a heart, black as raven's feathers.

For you fought and you battled, to achieve your main goal,
You silenced your scoffers, you won the big war
but in the war of the streets, 2 lives were the score
and though you gained the trophy, you gave up your soul

so caged by your actions, with no chance to flee,
you escaped from your bindings, and now you fly free,
you fool a whole nation with gospel from your beak,
but all that I hear is a crow's guilty plea.

you now roam the skies as an acquitted felon,
and devour your prey with your ring in your talons,
demanding the world call you a model and legend
so they may forget your lies and your past sins.

who am I to judge, just a bolstering critic,
they say it's half of the story, that I'm being a cynic
that it's all just a ploy or a self-serving gimmick,
that it's not how you start, but more how you finish

and it's true I can't judge, for I'm no judge or juror
but in the court of the People, I'll take it one further,
cause Lord knows I've been watching, and so is said by the birder,
"when your company is crows, it's nothing but murder."

13 comments:

  1. Yes... Fucking yes.

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  2. yes... he is such a fake,if he was truly sorry he would now speak the truth and tell what he knows

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    1. I completely agree. I'm not claiming to know exactly what happened to Baker and Lollar, only he and a few others know the truth. What I am saying is that he put himself in a terrible situation, and terrible surroundings, that will continue to tarnish his legacy to many football fans.

      if he is reformed and the changed man he claims to be he will say what happened that night.

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    2. He told what he knew as part of his plea bargain. Atlanta DA couldnt convict anyone. That is the real crime here. Atlanta typically drums up chares they cant prosecute. I suspect this whole damn thing was a sick joke. I saw the deceased family members interviewing a few weeks about it. My question was why was this bum with a record on the streets? I also noticed this convict who died also has a child in private school

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  3. Besides being based upon nothing but a hypocritical rant, this is just bad poetry.

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  4. shits weak. loser patriot fan with a dildo in his ass

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  5. You fuckin patriot are cry babies!!!!! let God jugde worry about your own sins!!!! It's just football what a sore loser!!!!!!

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    1. this was posted January 14th. the patriots v. ravens game was the 20th.

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  6. Just so Ravens fans know, this was written before the Patriots and Ravens game was played and wasn't written by a Patriots fan.

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    1. or a Broncos fan or a Colts fan or any AFC North team fan before all that comes up.

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  7. Regardless of politics, it contains great wordplay. Good medium for some sports creativity besides a boring article. Well done, even though I don't agree :)

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